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The Difference a "Y" Can Make


The model, the body, the human form.
The most striking femininity the gods would allow.
Females were created without compromise,
Mistake or apology.

Their eye-contact is a transcendental rapport.
Face, straight-on, the greatest truth of another;
A connection beyond communication.
Yet at the softest glare it is undone.

There is always a firm embrace within the body
Of a strong woman.  The idea to be ineffable,
Self-assured, ensconced.
She chooses to be unbreakable.

Even in darkness the female body is left unscathed.
There is luminosity revealed in every curve,
Every flaw, every pore on her skin.
Nothing can defeat such a masterpiece.

In the end, she was created to stretch to the
Utmost of limitations.
To give birth, to feel emotions, to love
And be loved.
All the while she still maintains the beauty for which
She is so well-known.
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This poem was inspired by ALL of the female fine art nudes by Jay Henry (dA page [link])

I'm not normally one to write poetry but they were all so powerful I was moved to create something lyrical about them. Honestly, not many words can explain them! This will probably be the ONLY piece of literature in my gallery...

©2008 Jillian Hope Bean

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*artistformallyknowna:iconartistformallyknowna: Apr 25, 2008, 4:25:22 PM Mood: Joy
wow!!! such a beautiful poem. i love it.

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like my plastic surgeon used to say 'if you gotta go, go with a smile!'
~sweetjillybean:iconsweetjillybean: Apr 25, 2008, 6:24:05 PM
Really? I was wondering if it was lame or not :) Again, not the poetry-writing type!

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*artistformallyknowna:iconartistformallyknowna: Apr 25, 2008, 9:29:12 PM
im confused as to who wrote it. was it you?

oh yea it is awesome.

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like my plastic surgeon used to say 'if you gotta go, go with a smile!'
~sweetjillybean:iconsweetjillybean: Apr 26, 2008, 10:13:07 AM
Of course it was me! :) I wouldn't put anything up like that unless it was written by me. It was INSPIRED by photos taken by Jay Henry

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*artistformallyknowna:iconartistformallyknowna: Apr 26, 2008, 12:38:40 PM
heheh sorry.

well yes it is a very beautiful poem. i hope you have more to post up. :)

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like my plastic surgeon used to say 'if you gotta go, go with a smile!'
*DiomedesZX:iconDiomedesZX: Apr 30, 2008, 11:19:19 AM
There's one line I particularly like.... but first I want to know your favorite lines. (I write occasionally too, I konw there's some part of this that you're especially proud of, so spill it!)

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"If I ask you only one thing, I'll ask you to believe in me."
~sweetjillybean:iconsweetjillybean: Apr 30, 2008, 11:42:04 AM
My favorite lines are actually on the second stanza... What are yours? :)

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*DiomedesZX:iconDiomedesZX: Apr 30, 2008, 1:54:59 PM
mines: "she was created to stretch to /The utmost of limits."

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"If I ask you only one thing, I'll ask you to believe in me."
~sweetjillybean:iconsweetjillybean: Apr 30, 2008, 4:27:17 PM
Really? That's awesome :) I'm so glad people like my EXPERIMENT here. I'm honestly not the kind of person who writes poetry that often. I used to, but I hit a plateau and this may be the best I can do! I'm really talkative and expressive, but that's what makes me so WEAK at writing poetry --I can't seem to express my emotions without saying WAY too many words! :D

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